I had a great time reading my parts for your screenplay presentation. Your characters are very distinct, each with their own voice. You can tell that you spent a lot of time developing them. I think you created a rich world as well. There is a Princess Bride feel to this story and that’s a good thing. I hope that you keep working on this story because I think it can play big to a certain audience. Great job, man!
John,
I had a great time reading my parts for your screenplay presentation. Your characters are very distinct, each with their own voice. You can tell that you spent a lot of time developing them. I think you created a rich world as well. There is a Princess Bride feel to this story and that’s a good thing. I hope that you keep working on this story because I think it can play big to a certain audience. Great job, man!
-Scott