I really like the music chosen, I think it works really well with the shots at the beginning of all the restaurants. You might consider introducing the subject with title cards a little bit before like when you write “Welcome to Easton” it might be good to put it a little bit before and maybe instead put at the end of the video your names. You might want to cut the first interview because it feels a little long like you might want to put some b-roll in between certain things he says so that there’s a little bit of a break from him talking. Also I think it would be really cool if some of the b-roll you used at the beginning would come back at the end to conclude the documentary.
I really like the music chosen, I think it works really well with the shots at the beginning of all the restaurants. You might consider introducing the subject with title cards a little bit before like when you write “Welcome to Easton” it might be good to put it a little bit before and maybe instead put at the end of the video your names. You might want to cut the first interview because it feels a little long like you might want to put some b-roll in between certain things he says so that there’s a little bit of a break from him talking. Also I think it would be really cool if some of the b-roll you used at the beginning would come back at the end to conclude the documentary.