Hey guys,

Here are the basic building blocks of my capstone (split into three parts at the moment).  The beginning and end are in the works still. I’d really appreciate your feedback on the following:

• overall structure/flow–does it seem awkward or forced? What would make the transition easier for you?
• cutting down the clips–what information is redundant/unnecessary? What moments do you think are most valuable?
• would stop motion or some kind of animated sequence throughout help tie things together or would it be obtrusive with the tone?
• where do I need to breathe?

Please keep in mind that sound and color our in progress! (Also the statistic is just a rough place holder right now)